Pity there's no sound because otherwise you'd hear me applauding.Terrific story telling with true emotional authenticity. Your ability to transmit all the awkwardness and that lack of social grace and self-confidence combined with your gift for capturing language (I can 'hear' the Mom and hear the differences in the kids) is really quite remarkable. Excellent work! I look forward to your next installment but will content myself for now with re-reading the first TWO parts until you share it. Thanks.
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